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Can You Really Feel Better, Boost Energy Levels, and
Attack Diseased Cells with an Extract from Mushrooms?
This is my daughter's cancer story. You be the judge.

Dear Friend:

The story you're about to read is the absolute truth. And I won't make one penny from telling it.

But I'm getting something more valuable than money. My satisfaction comes from knowing you're about to learn something that will greatly improve the quality of your life.

So if you give me 10 minutes of your time, you'll discover how to supercharge your immune system and shield yourself from the ravages of killer diseases.

A Promise You Can Benefit From

It all started 20 years ago. My 21-year-old daughter had just graduated from college. One day, without warning, she started getting nasty nosebleeds. And they wouldn't stop.

The doctor I took her to couldn't find anything wrong. He said it was most likely an allergic reaction and sent her home. My daughter's condition worsened so I took her to a second doctor who specialized in allergies. When he examined her, he became alarmed.

"John, you've got to get her to a cancer specialist right away." By this time my daughter was frail and exhausted. She had extensive swelling in her nose, throat, and lymph glands and continued to bleed. The cancer specialist took a biopsy of the lump he found inside her nose.

It was cancerous. The doctor sat me down with my wife and daughter. That's when he dropped the bombshell––my daughter only had 3 weeks to live! The cancer was running wild throughout her nose and down her throat––a nasopharyngeal carcinoma is what he called it.

Right then and there I made a promise––one you're going to benefit from.

Being a somewhat religious man, I made a vow––if I could save my daughter and pull her through this, I would learn everything there was about nutrition, health, and alternative therapy. And then I would give my knowledge away for free to anyone who needed and wanted it.

A Crash Course in Nutrition and Alternative Medicine

Time was short. I immediately began reading every book, magazine article, and research paper I could find about cancer, nutrition, herbs, and alternative treatments. Within just a few weeks, my office was cluttered with piles of holistic information––especially about fighting cancer with nutritional therapies. Based on what I was learning, I started my daughter on large doses of vitamins, minerals, and herbs.

And because I was spending so much time researching health and nutrition, I made the decision to go to school and become a certified nutritionist.

I tell you this so you'll understand how I'm able to give my unbiased opinion about an amazing immune system booster called mmPower-AHCC. When it comes to nutrition, health supplements, and the scientific literature, I know what I'm talking about.

Searching for an Answer

While I was looking for alternative ways to help my daughter fight the cancer, our doctor suggested the more conventional treatment route. Even though my daughter had such a short time to live, he claimed that chemotherapy and radiation would help stop the cancer from spreading.

So in the hospital, my daughter began a few weeks of grueling chemotherapy treatments. And every day, I was by her side making sure she was also swallowing my special concoctions of herbs and nutritional supplements.

After 6 rounds of chemotherapy, the doctor sent us home. He wasn't very hopeful of anything at this point.

But I wasn't going to sit by, do nothing, and watch my daughter waste away. I was going to continue devoting every waking second to helping her.

Putting Up a Fight

A strange thing occurred under this intensive nutritional approach. My daughter didn't lose her hair. And she didn't have any of the vomiting, weight loss, and other symptoms that normally occur with chemotherapy. Even the doctor was surprised to see how well she had come through.

Plus, the cancer went into remission. Though it was dormant, I continued to treat my daughter with high doses of vitamins, minerals, and herbs. I knew it was going to be a constant struggle to keep my daughter alive. The more I learned about nutrition and supplements, the more I continued to apply my knowledge in treating my daughter.

From 1982 to 1989, there were many ups and downs. Some weeks she felt okay but then she'd slip back into feeling sickly.

Then in 1989, there was...

Bad News...and a Discovery

After 7 years, and a long battle, my daughter had a relapse. A tumor was discovered in her lung and it had to be removed. There were more rounds of damaging chemotherapy. But she continued to receive better health treatments from me because I was now a certified nutritionist.

Fortunately, the cancer went into remission again and we avoided another disaster.

But I knew my daughter's immune system had taken a beating from the chemotherapy. And I had become increasingly concerned about my daughter's relapses. So I was constantly searching for a miraclemsubstance that might strengthen her body. It took me 11 years before I finally found it.

In September 2000, I read a report from Health Sciences Institute that helped change my daughter's life. The report (copy enclosed) told of a powerful new substance called ImmPower-AHCC––a hybridized mushroom extract.

Now, being a certified nutritionist, I'm skeptical of what I hear and read. So I did some research and read several scientific studies about AHCC.

What I learned astounded me. I couldn't get my daughter started on ImmPower-AHCC fast enough...

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